ext_14425 ([identity profile] sakon76.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rocknload 2007-10-19 06:39 pm (UTC)

Awesome story. So much fun. Thank you for the read!

When you were correcting for the Camaro not having rear doors, though, you missed one instance: "Satisfied with his work here, Bumblebee slams the rear door shut and honks, which means Stop staring and get in!"

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