Okay...first of all? Don't care that you only did three. Second of all? Don't care that you went back and worked on them.
You *so* *don't* suck. Really. You don't.
I liked all three. But I think the first one was absolutely awesome. Abso-friggin-lutely awesome. I would love to see that one expanded.
The second one? I liked. It didn't have the same emotional impact as the first, but I don't think it was really supposed to. And, sad as this sounds? I kinda think Obi was right about them not respecting Tony at his age. Not sure if that was really what he was thinking, but I think he was right anyway.
The third one? You nailed the whole "don't wanna care, don't wanna feel" vibe that Tony seems to have sometimes.
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Date: 2008-09-19 10:23 pm (UTC)You *so* *don't* suck. Really. You don't.
I liked all three. But I think the first one was absolutely awesome. Abso-friggin-lutely awesome. I would love to see that one expanded.
The second one? I liked. It didn't have the same emotional impact as the first, but I don't think it was really supposed to. And, sad as this sounds? I kinda think Obi was right about them not respecting Tony at his age. Not sure if that was really what he was thinking, but I think he was right anyway.
The third one? You nailed the whole "don't wanna care, don't wanna feel" vibe that Tony seems to have sometimes.
All-in-all? Great trio of ficlets. ;-)